coffee doesn't seem to work anymore.....
Unfeeling
everything looks flat
(i need 3-D glasses)
everything tastes bland
(i need spices)
everything is dull
(i need a needle)
everything is ho-hum
(someone slap me, please!)
© 2011 Sonya Florentino
photo by Mick Rheault
http://www.flickr.com/photos/mickrheault/3466185743/
Jenny Gordon
Listlessness so aptly conveyed in these couplets which carry the sentiment so beautifully, evoking the hint of restlessness behind it, seems, frustration lurking in the dissatisfaction of the present reality where energy to live seems nonexistent.
Listlessness so aptly conveyed in these couplets which carry the sentiment so beautifully, evoking the hint of restlessness behind it, seems, frustration lurking in the dissatisfaction of the present reality where energy to live seems nonexistent.
Raj Arumugam
witty, realistic, a solid good poem that's better than coffee!
witty, realistic, a solid good poem that's better than coffee!
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Funny...If they slap you, how will you control yourself and not slap back?...lol I love it...never felt that way but, there is time. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Funny...If they slap you, how will you control yourself and not slap back?...lol I love it...never felt that way but, there is time. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
TonyaC
You just expressed my thoughts - perfectly!
You just expressed my thoughts - perfectly!
Karin Anderson
An artful composition on inertia when people can't find the initiative to break a negative cycle. Your slap certainly does the trick Sonya!
An artful composition on inertia when people can't find the initiative to break a negative cycle. Your slap certainly does the trick Sonya!
Munia Khan
Can feel this unfeeling so hard Sonya..Wow !! Very innovative write.Love it so much..
Can feel this unfeeling so hard Sonya..Wow !! Very innovative write.Love it so much..
carol
smack! no no good better to hug
smack! no no good better to hug
Lynda Robson
Poor Sonya, that's how I feel sometimes, it will pass, xx
Poor Sonya, that's how I feel sometimes, it will pass, xx
kath
An innovative take on the mind-fug that gets to all of us now and again Sonya! :) kath xxx
An innovative take on the mind-fug that gets to all of us now and again Sonya! :) kath xxx
PrEmJi PrEmJi
poetic slap!
poetic slap!
Kesav V Easwaran
You need a slap? well, soon you would find a word that would slap wake you up, out of your ho-hum dozing...nice words on the block, Sonya
You need a slap? well, soon you would find a word that would slap wake you up, out of your ho-hum dozing...nice words on the block, Sonya
nimal dunuhinga
Awake! Otherwise we cannot see the tricky World and we miss all the opportunities?
Awake! Otherwise we cannot see the tricky World and we miss all the opportunities?
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Slap a lady? Isn't it enough that we had a messaging stalker!lol! Inventive work, young missy! ~FjR~
Slap a lady? Isn't it enough that we had a messaging stalker!lol! Inventive work, young missy! ~FjR~
Ency Bearis
doctor, doctor help her, get her better please, give her the narcan to wake her up or spirit of amonia to wake her up or the best is a prince charming to give kiss for splendor.....
doctor, doctor help her, get her better please, give her the narcan to wake her up or spirit of amonia to wake her up or the best is a prince charming to give kiss for splendor.....
Sandra Martyres
I can relate to this piece at the moment Sonya..well written
I can relate to this piece at the moment Sonya..well written
You are the voice of many... love that picture too.