I Wish Your Commanding Vision

What I wish to be, I will never be
to you, unless I can become
a master hypnotist
make you see what I see,
believe it of me whole heartedly
In human vision
we are distorted
down to reality

Waving all my glories
for you to grasp freely
swaying my intellect rapidly
Your eyes are getting heavy,
your imagination overwhelms
Your vision becomes holy,
I am now an icon
A goddess of all womanity

Mysterious and sensual
you are wrapped in a web
not of deceipt, but of how
I should be seen by
the one who loves me
The third eye is what restores
us to all of our full capacity

Ron Peat
What you say// hasn't gone away/ it's always been done/ to have a little fun. It's nothing new/ to me or you. Delilah had the flare/ Samson had the hair/ They both knew the dance/ began in their pants/ In the end no one can be trusted/ they all get busted. someone is being blind/ while another gets behind./ If can't keep up/ put a penny in the cup/// A poet friend//RH Peat

Chaos1214
Ha ha... No thanks... being in a trance would take all the fun out of hanging out with you.

eleanor prince
I find this a fascinating way of handling this topic. You had me right to the last line... Brilliant!

RAJ NANDY
Sandra , this hypnotist idea sounds great with your patient on the couch , probing into the subconscious to open up the mystical third eye ! - Raj

Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Hey, nice image a la abstractif.... but what happened to your other half? Is this a 2-part series ? I Like this from top to bottom,Missy...(The Poem, The Poem!)....)Geeeze ! ~FjR~

Fay Slimm
Sandra that's the best idea I've ever read for neglected womankind - - hypnotizing men should be obligatory. A potent and effective verse.

stevenstirk
Ah shucks .. I bet you are a genuine goddess of all womanity. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, unfortunately so is bias, comparison and wanton disregard. Great piece Sandra . Steve..... (God of all masculinity)