Coiled Snake by Scott SM

Ignorance

All illusions are dreams
All dreams- illusions…
A piece of rope that was
On view in the light,
Dawned on to me
As a coiled snake
In the darkness
Of my ignorance
Of my yester life-
Yester night...

The dawn inside me
Is still in daze...

~Kesav Venkat Easwaran~
November-4- 2011
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narain, jay p.
Nice one again.
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Sylvia Frances Chan
i like the two last lines, Kesav...so lovely! This Poem is like Philosophy! it depends on how we look at things: a plane from very far, to my opinion is a big black point, others would still say that that is a plane...Well thought poem, another Jewel!
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Ken e Hall
Love to know the meaning of this dream as we are all in wonder of our dreams as the last lines put it ...regards
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PrEmJi PrEmJi
ignorance is a beautiful state of life!
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Ron Peat
Oh here the snake rope is devouring it's tail. Wonderfully done Kesav. The endless circle is always complete. A poet friend./RH Peat
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Bob Blackwell
Illusion, a sleight of hand, to clever for our ignorance, but we have to act upon what we see, even if we wake up with a shock. Clever writing, but it still has beauty of your chosen words.
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Ency Bearis
Brilliant logic with wisdom to ponder
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Sandra Martyres
Kesav this is poetry at its best....the picture enhances the poem very well too...TFS
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Elena S
Oh dear friend, deep write, we can sit and read, admire and keep staring to both the picture and the words for many years in a row..Thank you!
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mamta agarwal
the first two lines and the last two are really philosophical. We need illusions to survive in this world as reality in all its nakedness is at times difficult to face. In such a state our nerves are on edge The dawn inside me Is still in daze... dawn is dazed for you don't recognise it- it's another day!
 
seema chowdhury
very deep and philosophical.
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aryaindia
How impressed am I with this great truth within this highly immaculately pressed poem. You have to come out of the daze by dawn, Kesav
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LightH2O
Wise words, well written.
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carol
this is excellent
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Kendzi
The dawn inside me is still in a daze. . .that line alone could who a nobel prize! Lovely write Kesav!
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magnolia
These are great thoughts Kesav and made me ponder on them for a while....Maggie
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samanyan
the dawn inside me is still in daze...amazing line says it all..lovely poem sir
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Karin Anderson
Yes I believe it is a daring truth from the past that can't be hidden from our knowing. The coiled snake and darkness make for stunning imagery Kesav!
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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
A daring truth...awesome! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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heather wilkins
the dawn inside me is still in daze.
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marvinbrato
Indeed, inspiring too!
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Lynda Robson
they say ignorance is bliss.... interesting write Kesav
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