Kissed by moonlight
Silver teardrops random fell,
kissed by moonlight on her face.
Touched by soft caressing lips,
until a smile, had took their place.
Shadows cast on sullen eyes,
passed as if the sun had shone.
The twilight slowly crept away,
twas then I knew her life was gone.
MoonBee
A Tragic Tale Lifted By Wistful Wording ... Excellent ... MoonBee
A Tragic Tale Lifted By Wistful Wording ... Excellent ... MoonBee
Karin Anderson
The silver teardrops melted me from the start. You have captured the ebb and sorrow of lost love so beautifully.
The silver teardrops melted me from the start. You have captured the ebb and sorrow of lost love so beautifully.
Fay Slimm
A wistful and sad transition towards the final line - well chosen length gives the verse a flow of peace.
A wistful and sad transition towards the final line - well chosen length gives the verse a flow of peace.
Leslie Alexis
sad meaning, yet beautifully written.
sad meaning, yet beautifully written.
Jack Williams
Not the poem I expected at all when I read the title. A very pleasing surprise (although I think I spy a typo in "caressing").
Not the poem I expected at all when I read the title. A very pleasing surprise (although I think I spy a typo in "caressing").
KissMoon123
OMG love this poem
OMG love this poem
Your turn words into silver and crystal and satin and pain and intoxication, you are a poets lover.