At a time of writer's block, a simple ditty I hope you enjoy...
Picture is by Stuart Palmer
Country Caress...
I'd like a walk
on country lane
meander drift and dream
A day when cares
have fled away
my spirit I redeem
I smell the earth
the leaves, the trees
and peace is on the way
A morning sun
caresses me
this hazy lazy day
robertchoward
Great! Thanks for including us on this fetching morning walk.
Great! Thanks for including us on this fetching morning walk.
Patrick McFarland
I wish I could pen poems this good when I have writers block. (Or anytime for that matter). I really enjoyed this light and airy piece that lifts the reader out of whatever doldrums he/she might currently be experiencing. Very nice indeed!
I wish I could pen poems this good when I have writers block. (Or anytime for that matter). I really enjoyed this light and airy piece that lifts the reader out of whatever doldrums he/she might currently be experiencing. Very nice indeed!
DavidPaulley
Beautifully expressed Robyn
Beautifully expressed Robyn
Tierra
Oh my goodness, this is by far one of the Finer pieces I have read..such a brilliance you paint for us...Simply Lovely.. Namaste@ Tierra @}-'-,
Oh my goodness, this is by far one of the Finer pieces I have read..such a brilliance you paint for us...Simply Lovely.. Namaste@ Tierra @}-'-,
cyclopseven
this wrapped me well. very soothing.
this wrapped me well. very soothing.
Meggie Gultiano
your words are so gentle and peaceful
your words are so gentle and peaceful
Ken e Hall
What a way to travel down a country lane on a hazy lazy day I am with you here on this pleasing ditty...regards
What a way to travel down a country lane on a hazy lazy day I am with you here on this pleasing ditty...regards
Ron Peat
Light and airy, the sweetness of sunny days. A poet friend//RH Peat
Light and airy, the sweetness of sunny days. A poet friend//RH Peat
Kesav V Easwaran
Line short and sweet...lovely muse on your countryside-morning feels, Robyn
Line short and sweet...lovely muse on your countryside-morning feels, Robyn
Sana Rose
So sweet and with gentle flow... Nice poem, Robyn.. No signs of W.B. anywhere around this poem, let alone in it. Nature is always the best therapy.. :)
So sweet and with gentle flow... Nice poem, Robyn.. No signs of W.B. anywhere around this poem, let alone in it. Nature is always the best therapy.. :)
seema chowdhury
Beautiful , reminded me of the olden days, lovely and touchy.
Beautiful , reminded me of the olden days, lovely and touchy.
Munia Khan
Your wonderful poetry takes us to your country Robyn.Very beautiful depiction of natural serenity.So much enjoyed this great work.
Your wonderful poetry takes us to your country Robyn.Very beautiful depiction of natural serenity.So much enjoyed this great work.
Karin Anderson
There is nothing like nature to renew our spirit and become one with nature. I can imagine it all through your soothing photo and words. The smell of the earth really caught my eye. Thanks for sharing even though writer's block has come to visit and I know the feeling~
There is nothing like nature to renew our spirit and become one with nature. I can imagine it all through your soothing photo and words. The smell of the earth really caught my eye. Thanks for sharing even though writer's block has come to visit and I know the feeling~
Abhinav Baruah
Soothing... so delightful!
Soothing... so delightful!
Debs
Awww this one is so good, loved the lazy hazy day and the morning sun.
Awww this one is so good, loved the lazy hazy day and the morning sun.
RAJ NANDY
Loved this ditty Friend , I could hear the music too ! -Raj
Loved this ditty Friend , I could hear the music too ! -Raj
Jenny Gordon
Ah, but this is rich! The title is so suitable, the imagery expressive and beautiful, aptly conveying the delightful, peaceful reality, paired with the fitting picture, all proffers a sweet, precious moment of a poem, thoroughly lovely! I love it!
Ah, but this is rich! The title is so suitable, the imagery expressive and beautiful, aptly conveying the delightful, peaceful reality, paired with the fitting picture, all proffers a sweet, precious moment of a poem, thoroughly lovely! I love it!
A light and carefree composition about taking the time "to smell the roses" and to center oneself in nature. The sentiment is Wordsworthian.