© RH Peat 6/27/2011 12:32pm
Form: 3 couplets/ 6 lines
Spiritual Gymnastics
Spiritual Gymnastics
Very tired and aching,
she said: “God!”
Somewhat deaf he inquired:
“Did you call me?”
“No!” she replied
“I’m just talking to myself.”
© RH Peat 6/27/2011
sensebreeze
Absolutely wow!
Absolutely wow!
Nikunj
Yes wometimes unknowingly we explore the depths of self ...reaching out to the unseen m unheard and unsought...
Yes wometimes unknowingly we explore the depths of self ...reaching out to the unseen m unheard and unsought...
Weeping willow
Sometimes you just feel like that.Gonna ask God that someday.Why he's silent when we pray.
Sometimes you just feel like that.Gonna ask God that someday.Why he's silent when we pray.
La Finita
Lol! Maybe she shoul try emails..
Lol! Maybe she shoul try emails..
Cat
Ha Ha, Cat
Ha Ha, Cat
Chaos1214
Ha ha... A child of a lesser God, no doubt. : D
Ha ha... A child of a lesser God, no doubt. : D
Jenny Gordon
Wow. Impressive. The couplet form easily isolates the individual thoughts making the whole, which in this case says so much in so few words.
Wow. Impressive. The couplet form easily isolates the individual thoughts making the whole, which in this case says so much in so few words.
sathyanarayana
This is great poem to ponder over...few lines...so much to think about....thanks for sharing.
This is great poem to ponder over...few lines...so much to think about....thanks for sharing.
Ency Bearis
ha,ha, I like your humor here
ha,ha, I like your humor here
Ata
It is simple superb !,tfs
It is simple superb !,tfs
Sandra Martyres
Great write Ron!!
Great write Ron!!
very nice and i like your economy of words.