Melancholy
How I'd love
to disappear
into a world
of crimson cheer
To lose myself
in such a place
and never see
a desperate face
Never another
desperate face...
magnolia
ah,would we but we could.....
ah,would we but we could.....
kath
When melancholy strikes it seems the whole world wears a desperate face. Personally, I find that avoiding mirrors helps with feelings of melancholy Patrick. Sadly, I'm searching for new specs at the mo, so I'm forced to gurn at myself on a regular basis! Excellent poem though! :) kath xxx
When melancholy strikes it seems the whole world wears a desperate face. Personally, I find that avoiding mirrors helps with feelings of melancholy Patrick. Sadly, I'm searching for new specs at the mo, so I'm forced to gurn at myself on a regular basis! Excellent poem though! :) kath xxx
tom balch
If only Patrick, if only.
If only Patrick, if only.
Sandra Martyres
In today's world Patrick that is almost a dream....I agree with Lynda - a perfect description of melancholy
In today's world Patrick that is almost a dream....I agree with Lynda - a perfect description of melancholy
Lynda Robson
An apt description of melancholia Partick, well composed
An apt description of melancholia Partick, well composed
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Patrick, my good friend, in looking over the state of global affairs & its short & long term outlook....i'll take CHEER in any colour!!!!!!!!!! Aye, indeed, good versin' !Long time, mate !Wher' ya bin' eydin'? ~FjR~
Patrick, my good friend, in looking over the state of global affairs & its short & long term outlook....i'll take CHEER in any colour!!!!!!!!!! Aye, indeed, good versin' !Long time, mate !Wher' ya bin' eydin'? ~FjR~
Crimson cheer...isn't that an apt depiction of melancholy? Wonderful refrain excellently and effectively making the point. Beautiful tribute to miserable reality. Haunting, poignant, yet almost rather lovely. Well done.