written upon awakening this morning.....

Remembered

Like a forgotten dream

you must have come

while I was sleeping


a brush of wings

a glimpse of sky

a whispered goodbye



© 2011 Sonya Florentino



photo by Terra Kate
http://www.flickr.com/photos/terrakate/5377868215/

Jenny Gordon
Beautiful and bittersweet, poignantly evoking in seeming simplicity, in terseness, the grief of remembered lost love, tantalizing in mere dreams, its delight unsubstantial. Excellent!

Kesav V Easwaran
nice mystical piece Sonya...the image provides more impact to your theme

Munia Khan
Very beautiful Sonya..A mystical yet flying piece of work.

ritz_guns
wonderful.....

Lynda Robson
Beautiful Sonya...

Sandra Martyres
Just beautiful Sonya... I agree with Susan

Susan Jarvis
An ethereal, ephemeral marvel of a poem - just beautiful. :)

Karin Anderson
An intriguing poem and just a whisper away. How beautiful and special Sonia and perhaps it was your angel muse~~

Patrick McFarland
Beautiful Cat.

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Ah...! (at top volume) Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Cat
lovely, Cat

Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
"a brush of wings"...Wish i had written that!Succinctly Simpatico quilling,Lassie ! ~FjR~

narain, jay p.
nice

wombat
Beauty expressed.

MoonLi
Just lovely!

Ency Bearis
remarkable thought apt to subject