Aged Eyes
My eyes are dimmed with sorrow
and have aged because of my woes
It's hard to see the future
and what passing time may hold
The truth is in the heart
And what eyes cannot see
Because seeing is not always believing
It's in the heart that sings free
jacobi4u
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Greeting dear. Happy to find your well view your profile to day at www.poetfreak.com I am Nimal, by name am single lady with good sense of humour. I am very reliable with trust and honest, I love nature and i enjoy traveling, looking for a honest and seriours relationship.plaese contact me with my email nimaljacobi@yahoo.com
sugi
Sad lines...but at lsat you have found pleasure out of pain..!
Sad lines...but at lsat you have found pleasure out of pain..!
Sandra Martyres
A sad verse JoAnn...I hope you are not suffering too much..my thoughts are with you and I am happy to see you back on PF.
A sad verse JoAnn...I hope you are not suffering too much..my thoughts are with you and I am happy to see you back on PF.
I think you could cut the word "in" in the closing line. Freedom of the heart is spiritual freedom. It is the release of the true self. Fantastic poem in that sense alone. Liberation of the self is the greatest strength to any adversity. Many never find it in their lives. Thanx for sharing this Jo. A powerful 8 lines. A poet friend//RH Peat