Leave without warning
Leave without warning
The rain subsided this evening
but my tears endlessly flowing
my heart is aching and bleeding
for you leave without even warning
what have I done to deserve such treatment
I have never made a move without your involvement
but still you left without even confiding
and it makes my heart hurt and even failing
I remember the night when we talked in our bed
the words you have said keeps recalling on my head
never have I thought that today you will leave
here from the place where we both have been made
The rain subsided this evening
but my tears keeps on falling
I wish you were here to stop me from crying
but you already leave without even warning
By : D.C.D. dated 10.01.2010
Tia Lie
It's so touching Des-chan ^^ Love it.
It's so touching Des-chan ^^ Love it.
James T. Adair
Life is so hard and unfair sometimes....makes it harder to love and trust...but there is beauty in your poem.
Life is so hard and unfair sometimes....makes it harder to love and trust...but there is beauty in your poem.
kellticwarrior
Love, hurt and pain. It always amazing to me that such a positive emotion as love can be attached to feelings of hurt and pain. Powerful emotion in this write.....well done
Love, hurt and pain. It always amazing to me that such a positive emotion as love can be attached to feelings of hurt and pain. Powerful emotion in this write.....well done
Steve Slimm
the sadness of parting - and not knowing why. such is life at times. [This is more than likely a real poem for you. If so - I'm sorry you're hurting. If not - then you bring it alive!]
the sadness of parting - and not knowing why. such is life at times. [This is more than likely a real poem for you. If so - I'm sorry you're hurting. If not - then you bring it alive!]
Marietta
So lovely!!! its nice :)
So lovely!!! its nice :)
this so touched my heart~ sad but yet very beautiful~