A Concrete poem
“The Key”
.....................................The Key................ ...................................to my heart.........................
..............................is a secret of mine..................
........................that I only share with you...................
.......................And I trust.........you will not.............
.......................ever try to..........unlock this...................
...........................love sick heart of mine...........................
...............................for I can't survive.............................
..................................If you set this.............................
..................................... love free...............................
......................................forever............................
......................................I need.............................
......................................you to keep....................
......................................this key............................
......................................for love..............................
......................................to open............................
......................................all our desires...................
.......................................We 're.....................................
.......................................never......................
.......................................alone...........................
.......................................as long as we.............
.......................................have this key..............
.......................................with us.......................
Written on 15th-16th of June,2011
©Munia Khan 2011
ha haa, love the innovative poetic format, the poem itself is very romantic and touching to read Munia. LOVED it, after a long that i read one of your poems and glad that i ran in to this one.. :)
Great concrete poem Munia. I take my hat off to you doing it in word... When I do concrete poetry I take the easy way out and do it as a jpg in CorelDraw... which makes it impossible to post in many places. The Key to my heart is a secret of mine that I only share with you - lovely sentiment.
Wow. Never saw anything like this. Unique and well written to boot.
And a skilled 'Key' maker you are, Munia... Romantic... :)
I'm surprised that you haven't started a rush of people writing concrete poems. Perhaps the secret is that you have set the standard so high!
creative , expressive ,meaningful , love filled and enchanting too....a key that can open any lock
thats a wonderful key and so romantic with the thoughts of it
wow..you always amaze me Munia...and that key for me must be unlocked so you will have all avenues to see the beauty outside, right?Beautiful..
There is power in thee!..the form used makes it special. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Wow! Impressive! What a delightful use you make of the concrete form! La, but this is so fun! The shape subtly depicts the theme and the poem itself is beautiful and delightfully expressive, tinged with bittersweet. Very fascinating! Excellent! I like it and really enjoyed it! Well done!
really a concrete one... like your innovative way of expression...
Fantastical work from our dear sweet Key Cutter. Unlocking the secrets of another skill that you have with the Concrete Poem....Well Built Munia !!!
am totally awed Munia...a magnificent show !!
wow Munia, another stunner...you are so good with these concrete poems!!
lovely and romantic. good luck.
Ha ha... Super... You've shown me just how depressingly unromantic these new-fangled card-keys are : D
Stunning form Munia, you are so clever ! Excellent...Maggie x
a beautiful poem key- literally Munia!
Wow Munia...this concrete piece is excellent...so creatively composed...I agree with Karin, you have a special talent for this form!!
Another wonderfully written and composed Concrete Poem Munia. I love how you have made the shape and it a creative expression of your talent Munia.
I hope the key unlocks the door to all your dreams. Interesting and clever poem
Excellent work and done in the shape of a key too ! Most impressive tfs
Oh! Like your key so much Munia ... keep it password protected!!
Oh this deserves loud applause Munia. A beautifully worded and etched key - - wonderfully clear in both content and form. Very well done.
I came by for a 2nd read of this beautiful write..Its totally fascinating with beauty & shape :)