My Haiku-Senryu Pack#2
~Breath
Succinct short as breath
Good ones take your breath away-
Haiku poems they
~Pot
The sodium heart
Fretting and fuming throbs hot-
Jealous water pot
~Mist
Milky morning cups
Eager cutie cloudlets seek-
Misty mountain peaks
~Kesav Venkat Easwaran~
October-10- 2011
Image :
http://www.flickr.com/photos/antifag/1103366935/
Marie
Excellently crafted poetic gems, with good use of alliteration and visual detail. Beautiful artistic expression, so poetically inked! Very inspiring work, Kesav. A joy to read your wonderful work once more. I have surely missed it, dear friend. Thank you for sharing. Blessings always.....
Excellently crafted poetic gems, with good use of alliteration and visual detail. Beautiful artistic expression, so poetically inked! Very inspiring work, Kesav. A joy to read your wonderful work once more. I have surely missed it, dear friend. Thank you for sharing. Blessings always.....
Jenny Gordon
Delightful, fun and lovely with beautiful imagery, delivered up in tidy tercets of haiku/senryus as of a platter of delicacies to savor. Sweet.
Delightful, fun and lovely with beautiful imagery, delivered up in tidy tercets of haiku/senryus as of a platter of delicacies to savor. Sweet.
Indira Renganathan
Like crystal your brilliance in these....thanks Kesav for this beautiful pack
Like crystal your brilliance in these....thanks Kesav for this beautiful pack
PrEmJi PrEmJi
truly great...
truly great...
Elena S
Yes, true, such poems to takes our breath away, you always know how to. Thank you!
Yes, true, such poems to takes our breath away, you always know how to. Thank you!
sugi
Am reminded of a saying " Precious things always comes in small parcels"... the same here Kesav. Crisp and thoughtful.!!!
Am reminded of a saying " Precious things always comes in small parcels"... the same here Kesav. Crisp and thoughtful.!!!
seema chowdhury
very nice and beautiful, lovely picture to complement your composition.
very nice and beautiful, lovely picture to complement your composition.
magnolia
milky morning cups...how wonderful !..love this Kesav..
milky morning cups...how wonderful !..love this Kesav..
Nilotpal Sarmah
Very beautiful; Specially the one on the mist; Very picturesque and intriguing thoughts. 'Fretting and fuming throbs hot'. '
Very beautiful; Specially the one on the mist; Very picturesque and intriguing thoughts. 'Fretting and fuming throbs hot'. '
Kendzi
That's what you get at Poetfreak; four Haikus on one click! Wonderful imagery, Kesav!
That's what you get at Poetfreak; four Haikus on one click! Wonderful imagery, Kesav!
Karin Anderson
Creative use of imagery and "eager cutie cloudlets seeking misty mountain peaks" did it for me!
Creative use of imagery and "eager cutie cloudlets seeking misty mountain peaks" did it for me!
samanyan
BEAUTIFUL SENRYU'S...INFACT THE SUBJECT IS HAIKU
BEAUTIFUL SENRYU'S...INFACT THE SUBJECT IS HAIKU
heather wilkins
Kesav, these are great haikus.
Kesav, these are great haikus.
carol
excellent kesav
excellent kesav
Ency Bearis
great imagery of haiku
great imagery of haiku
Lynda Robson
Nice imagery in these haiku/senryu's
Nice imagery in these haiku/senryu's
Kamala
All the beauty of haiku and senryu!
All the beauty of haiku and senryu!
T A Ramesh
Interesting images used in the Haikus are nice!
Interesting images used in the Haikus are nice!
sathyanarayana
apart from being short and succinct your poems are packed with right sounding words Sir..they always give that extra flavour....these haiku/senryu are no different. So super.
apart from being short and succinct your poems are packed with right sounding words Sir..they always give that extra flavour....these haiku/senryu are no different. So super.
Sandra Martyres
They are all super haiku/senryu..I liked the last one best... what a wonderful depiction of mist....
They are all super haiku/senryu..I liked the last one best... what a wonderful depiction of mist....
Lovely Poetry...a delight to read and so well crafted Kesav. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing