⋅ 17 July 2013

A Lover's Soliloquy

He said, with ardor, that he loves me,
That his heart, for my heart, pines,
Of this obsession I see 
Insanely, innocuous signs.
He called me his Winnie the Pooh,
His panda and his dove,
(Ought I lock myself in the zoo?
Seems I'm an animal that he loves).
He said that like an anthology,
I was an interesting read
(He doesn't know the e of my etymology
For I'm written all in Greek).
He said that he would be thrilled
To have me as his wife.
(But if I were to light his kitchen, 
He'd have a short shelf life).
He said that like the sky,
My eyes were blue and deep,
That my voice was a sweet lullaby..
(Dear me! Should I put him to sleep?).
He said that my pretty smile,
Was as wide as a well made road,
(Well, he'd have to run for miles,
Before he reached my sweet abode)
He said that I was a Wonder
Like the great barrier reef,
(I sure hope he goes down-under,
I might get some reprieve.)
I think it's really not me,
That with fervor he thinks he loves
But what he wants me to be,
For I am none of the above.
And when I am by his side,
Like a bubble I do burst,
From him, I must hide,
For he brings out my very worst.
And so my handsome lover boy,
He rants on and on,
How atrociously he annoys..
So scat, scram and begone!

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  • Ah tongue in cheek indeed, so sweet and cute! :P17 Jul 2013 by

  • Hey this is so well written with generous dollops of tongue in cheek humour... Loved it!17 Jul 2013 by

  • This made me smile with its wit and chequered humour. It tells a familiar story of those who think paying compliments wins a fair heart. An engaging read .17 Jul 2013 by

  • I love the tongue-in-cheek gentle humour throughout your compelling piece... Your astute insight shows you wouldn't be bought with mere flattery... well done!17 Jul 2013 by

  • Top write my friend and much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.17 Jul 2013 by

  • Wow, such wit (and wisdom ! ) Love it Nishu...Maggie17 Jul 2013 by

  • a lovely write as if from a teen ager17 Jul 2013 by

  • Expressions of love casting long shadows on the yards of reality , filling sometimes and stimulating sometimes. Your have spun an interesting poem from your magical creative wheel ...wow is my word.17 Jul 2013 by

  • I like this allot classic and written in a high elegant style with a beautiful cadence but with a wonderful twist of humor.18 Jul 2013 by

  • Ouch! Being a boy myself, I giggle-winced at this write. But it's craftfully written with superb rhyming, and great humor. Remind me never to try wooing a poetess with compliments.18 Jul 2013 by

  • I was riveted to your words all the way through and admired your rhyme and humorous expressions that had me smiling at your originality. You are not to be fooled and the last lines are a triumph with great credit to you Nishu~19 Jul 2013 by

  • oh, just love this, and your last lines are remarkable!19 Jul 2013 by

  • Very well crafted Nishu! I fully agree with Karin's remarks! Also thanks for your time & remarks on my Christian & Byzantine Art! -Raj20 Jul 2013 by

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