⋅ 4 March 2012
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Photo from Flickr by regimentalrogue

THE UNKNOWN SOLDIER (Attempt at tanka)

Centuries had passed
Like time his memory fades
A grave is his home
The grey stone tells his story
“Lost at war his name unknown”








Picture courtesy of regimentalrogue flickr.com

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  • An excellent tanka..a tribute to the unknown soldier! 4 Mar 2012 by

  • beautiful tribute to the soldier. nice write Pat. 4 Mar 2012 by

  • Awww a very nice tribute to an unknow soldier! 4 Mar 2012 by

  • Vow... crisp and historical too...!!! 4 Mar 2012 by

  • Wonderful, Pat!! What a beautiful testament to an unknown soldier. Well written, my lovely friend.....Jerry (*_*) 4 Mar 2012 by

  • Just saying "Unknown Soldier" is powerful. A very good poem... Bravo 4 Mar 2012 by

  • We salute your effort! 4 Mar 2012 by

  • the unknown soldier has come to life, for you have put him or her in paradise. this unknown soldier died for us and in him/her we had put our trust. thank you so much for the rememberance !10 Mar 2012 by

  • A remembrance poem with true sincerity...“He gave all of his tomorrows for our today”11 Mar 2012 by

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