⋅ 21 February 2012

Sugar For Your Cuppa?

Maybe just a little bit more,
Maybe a tad bit less.

Oh now a bit more.

It goes along the lines.
A tad bit more a tad bit less.

Swirls like a cube.
Swirls of amber,
Or maybe gold;
Who knows.

Just a little bit more,
A tad bit less.

Do you want another?
Oh yes please!

The amber it tastes of Darjeeling
And the cubes of canes.

Maybe just a Tad bit more now?
Yes yes indeed, if you say so.

Ah! This is heavenly.

What a lovely cuppa
Tis turned out to be.

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  • sounds interesting.21 Feb 2012 by

  • Sugar is sweet! But the mysterious life's bitter?21 Feb 2012 by

  • Darjeeling thus blessed with that bit of sweetness is too ambrosial indeed. My darling favourite! Delightful dainty tribute to that indulgence' pleasure. I enjoyed it.21 Feb 2012 by

  • i find you just hide yourself behind those ahhs and repetitions. it's good for some poems, but it's not cool to use it as a style. annoys the fuck out of me.26 Feb 2012 by

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