⋅ 16 February 2012

A Rose to Remember

Author's Note: A simple rose to be impressed by your love one will have your heart beat to its rhythm.

The pick from your garden,
Your special flower that came from the heart.
One of a kind, just the lucky person
The lucky person that gets to have you and hold.

Its bright red color glows your eyes.
Its powerful aroma opens your mind.
The petals fall off one by one
To show the time for something important.

Just two more petals left
It's time for your evening scene
Nightfall comes down with a moonlight.
No more petals, you are officially mine!

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  • Great piece, romantic write!16 Feb 2012 by

  • some lovely lines here to enjoy... the rose with its 'powerful aroma opens your mind...'16 Feb 2012 by

  • Falling of petals from the flower with the passage of time tells very well the enjoyment of love to its logical fulfilment!16 Feb 2012 by

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