⋅ 9 February 2012

Adam And Eve

When God was otherwise occupied,
What Adan and Eve did was bawdy.
Adam shed his fig leaf as Eve sighed
While he caressed her nude body.

With God being so busy elsewhere,
Adam and Eve had all day to play,
Fondling their bodies without a care,
Far too aroused to fear what God would say.

Eve loved the feel of his hands on her,
His fingers roaming over her skin
Pleasuring her with his soft whisper
As Adam soon led Eve into sin.

Adam and Eve had merged into one,
Shared their desire with love's sweet release.
They lay passion spent under the sun
Near the Taboo tree, sleeping in peace.

They woke at the sound of God's deep voice,
"You two have fallen to carnal lust,
Have savored each other's flesh by choice;
Exile from Eden is fair and just!"

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  • love this one Carl. there is probably more truth than fiction here. where is Lilith? 9 Feb 2012 by

  • interesting.. 9 Feb 2012 by

  • A totally new take on the Adam and Eve Saga... 9 Feb 2012 by

  • great. And thus the creation began. 9 Feb 2012 by

  • Still, not a bad trade. Great poem Carl. 9 Feb 2012 by

  • New version of Adam and Eve story is very nice to read! 9 Feb 2012 by

  • Adam and Eve and fig leaves? Challenge yourself. Google First Scandal.11 Feb 2012 by

  • Vow...!!! A Great attempt on an eternal sin, which also enlightened mankind with its everlasting pleasure... and that you writing has added a flavor to it..Well done Carl..!!!28 Feb 2012 by

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