⋅ 20 November 2011
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First day of fog this november

First day of fog this November


As I woke
This Sunday morn
Glanced towards
My window on right;

My home was
Enveloped in dense fog!
Nothing visible
To naked eyes.

Did I frown
Or felt down…
No,
I quite like
Winter’s white translucent gown!

Crawled back
Into bed
Covered my head
My senses
Shall get much needed rest,
I felt.
Enjoyed the feel
Of being
Sole inhabitant
On the planet!

But my joy, oh
Didn’t last long,
As just then
normally erratic
Maid, who loves playing
Truant

Rang the bell!

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  • Nice poem Mamta.. I liked the allusion to winter's translucent gown. It perfectly describes the Delhi fog!!20 Nov 2011 by

  • Beautiful! Through the fog you could see where the life goes?20 Nov 2011 by

  • Nice! Fog can be very inspiring, too!20 Nov 2011 by

  • Nice! Fog can be very inspiring, too!20 Nov 2011 by

  • Great imagery in a beautiful poem. God bless....Pat21 Nov 2011 by

  • Nice pleasing write, Mamta...enjoyed very much22 Nov 2011 by

  • Lovely, so beautiful and enticing, poignant with excellent imagery, concluding how realistically bittersweet. I enjoyed it.25 Nov 2011 by

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