⋅ 20 November 2011

Twixt flame and claw (Haiku)

In grass fire thermals
feathers lazily fluttering
death waits in the wind

© K R Brandli 11/20/2011

Sign in or create an account to write feedback
  • Great imagery in this well written haiku20 Nov 2011 by

  • Horrific to think on is this advent of nature Ken - - your title is telling and the haiku - just right.20 Nov 2011 by

  • well captured ... fascinating, recognizing that the fire will flush out prey . Predators, always looking for an edge. Good job distilling this scene into haiku form.21 Nov 2011 by

Do you really want to delete?

The comment will be deleted for ever. Are you sure?