⋅ 11 January 2010

pleasant evening

orangy sun says see ya

Vanilla moon says Hi

clouds changes its dress to dark

honking traffic goes dumb

mom's coffee in the right hand

mobile buzzing friend's funky message

cool breeze touches and goes

is'nt that a pleasant evening???

I guess it is.....


-Vijay

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  • sure it does sounds like a pleasant evening. pl see some of my poems and send your valuable comments.11 Apr 2010 by

  • That was a very practical piece of poetry. It reflects that you should live every moment of your life.24 Dec 2010 by

  • all things going as normal as day comes to a close... clearly expressed :)27 May 2011 by

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